2019/5/18 12:35:55
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This essay is from CET6 test in June 2016, which belongs to the part of the translation.
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深圳是中国广东省一座新开发的城市.在改革开放之前，深圳不过是一个渔村，仅有三万多人。20世纪80年代，中国政府建立了深圳经济特区，作为实施社会主义经济的试验田。如今，深圳的人口已经超过1,000万，整个城市发生了巨大的变化。
到2014年，深圳的人均GDP已达25,000美元，相当于世界上一些发达国家的水平。就综合经济实力来看，深圳居于中国顶尖城市之列。由于其独特的地位，深圳也是国内外企业家创业的理想之地。
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Chun is a newly developing city in Guangdong province of China. Before the Reform and Opening started, Sham Chun just a fishing village, which only had over thirteen thousand people in there. In the1980s, the Chinese government established the Sham Chun economic region, which as the test field of socialism market of economic. Hitherto, the number of Sham Chun’s population has increased by over ten million, and the whole city has changed a lot.
In 2014, the per-capita GDP of Sham Chun had arrived at twenty-five thousand dollars, which amount to the level in other developing countries in the world. In terms of the strength of integrated economic; Sham Chun is one of the elites city of China. As it owns unique status, Sham Chun is the paradise which attracts domestic and overseas entrepreneurs to start up their business.
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